Susanna Leonard Hill’s The Twelve Days of Christmas! Contest lured me in. How hard could it be? The challenge turned out to be a laborious climb up a steep and snowy mountain. But I managed to ponder, push forward, and play my way through, and came up with The Twelve Daves of December. I hope you enjoy my story, and long to be a Dave . . . having fun with friends, truly living life.
Live life. Be a Dave.
The Contest: Write a children’s holiday story using the basic
format/concept of The Twelve Days Of Christmas! Your story may
be poetry or prose, silly or serious or sweet, religious or not, based on
Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa or whatever you celebrate, but is not to
exceed 300 words.
THE TWELVE DAVES
OF DECEMBER
Twelve little Daves gather
for fun on the twelfth day of the twelfth month.
12 little Daves clip clop
about, catching snowflakes on the end of their snouts.
11 little Daves squeal peal
downhill, sledding hog wild for a wintry thrill.
10 little Daves swish
sway a slope, skiing over bumps like antelope.
9 little Daves pack stack
the snow, forming mighty forts, tough as buffalo.
8 little Daves duck chuck
snowballs, whizzing frozen spheres up and over fort walls.
7 little Daves knick
knock on doors, singing off key about snowflakes galore.
6 little Daves pit pat snowpigs,
adding coal eyes and multi-colored wigs.
5 little Daves hip hop along,
hoofing nature’s trail full of beauty and song.
4 little Daves sip slurp
cocoa, warming up from inside out, and head to toe.
3 little Daves splish splash
the scene, scooping up, and munching on snow cone cuisine.
2 little Daves stride
glide a pond, skating and falling right into a yawn.
1 little Dave chill
frills alone, strutting back home with a secret all his own.
I
enjoy being a Dave . . .
but
I’m really a Jerome!
34 comments:
Thanks, Teri! Happy Holidays to a fellow Dave at heart 😃⭐️
How fun. Way to go Jerome!
Very Clever!
So glad you're a Jerome fan, Johnell. ⭐️ Happy Holidays!
Thanks, Maria! And Happy Holidays! ⭐️
Absolutely delightful. Fun use of colorful words. And as an actual Dave, I should know. Ha.
That means a lot coming from an actual Dave😃 Thanks so much! And Happy Holidays! ✨
Cute story. Like you ending!
Thanks, Patricia! Happy Holidays⭐️
This is so clever, Jeanne...so glad you joined in Susanna's contest.
Hope your holidays are joyous!
Thank you, Vivian. I'm so glad I joined in. Happy holidays to you as well ⭐️
Very nice. Good luck and happy holidays!
Gotta love a story about lil piggies. Best Wishes!
Thanks for your kind words. Good luck and happy holidays to you as well!!
Thanks, Aileen. The funny part is that they transformed into piggies as I wrote the story. Jerome could be a different critter disguised as a piggie 😃
Best wishes and happy holidays to you! ⭐️
It does sound fun to be a Dave.
Lol. It is fun to be a Dave 😃 Happy holidays, Linda, and thanks for stopping by!
Lovely word choices! Sort of reminds me of FIFTEEN ANIMALS! by Sandra Boynton where all of the animals were named Bob. All but one, that is. But your story is definitely different and a wonderful celebration of the season! :)
Nice job, Jeanne.
Adorable story, Jeanne! Wonderful vivid language! :)
I LOVE your word choice! So fun!
Sandra Boynton's The Going to Bed Book, But Not the Hippopotamus, and Moo, Baa, La La La! were staples in our house. I'm curious to read Fifteen Animals. 😃 thanks for your comments, Jennifer, and have a wonderful holiday season!
Thanks for that. Happy holidays to you and yours!
So glad you enjoyed it, Gabi. Thanks for stopping by Curtin Corner, and for your comments. Happiest of holidays to you and yours!
Thanks! I wrote this, and revised and revised. Playing with the words was challenging fun. Happy holidays to you!!
Clever take to this tale, with great rhyming & twist at the end.
Thanks. Glad you liked the Daves' story, Patricia. Happy holidays!
love your word choice! Fun read-aloud.
Thanks, Lauri! Glad you enjoyed it. Happiest of holidays to you and yours!
What a wonderland of wintry fun! Those Daves sure know how to put the happy in holiday! I'm with Jerome - a Dave at heart even if actually a Susanna :) Thanks so much for joining in the fun, Jeanne, and happy holidays!
This contest was most definitely challenging fun! And, yes, I'm with team Dave too⛄️😃 Celebrating life by getting outside with friends and having fun.
Happiest of holidays to you and yours, Susanna!!✨
Wonderful example of word choice! I can really sense the fun and thrill of being a Dave. :D
Thanks so much, Deborah, for your kind words, and for stopping by Curtin Corner. Happiest of holidays to you and yours✨
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